Re-write it, keeping the narrative arc in mind, and then proof read it (out loud) to edit out the errors. Don’t give up.«1» 3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-10-18 22:56:44I’m giggling at jiggling asses!YianoReport 2012-03-31 20:02:19I didn’t know asses could giggle… Sex tamil Use a dictionary and a thesaurus to avoid homonyms, repetition of words/phrases and spelling errors. Use a dictionary and a thesaurus to avoid homonyms, repetition of words/phrases and spelling errors. Re-write it, keeping the narrative arc in mind, and then proof read it (out loud) to edit out the errors. You’re trying to develop the characters, build suspense and garner enough interest for a sequel but you fail. You’re trying to develop the characters, build suspense and garner enough interest for a sequel but you fail. Don’t give up.«1» is that some sort of flatulence?anonymous readerReport 2012-03-31 10:00:02Too short for the style of story.
